KR20100024223A - Forigen writing system for on-line, franchise management system having the forigen writing system and method thereof - Google Patents

Abstract

PURPOSE: An online foreign writing system, a franchise management system with the foreign writing system and a method thereof are provided to enable a foreign lecturer to check compositions that members compose with a foreign language, thereby totally evaluating sentences that each member composes. CONSTITUTION: Member terminals(10) write sentences according to decided themes after accessing to a home page. A lecturer terminal(50) examines and evaluates transmitted compositions. A lecturer terminal checks levels of the compositions and outputs lecturer evaluation signals. A web server(30) transmits the lecturer evaluation signals to the member terminals.

Description

Writing learning system using online and franchise operating system and method including the same {Forigen writing system for on-line, Franchise management system having the forigen writing system and method}

The present invention relates to a foreign language learning system using online. Specifically, each affiliated store registered through a partnership between a foreign language writing learning system and a company that evaluates and points out a written member's writing on a topic presented through online. Distribute certain skins, homepages, and login pages to each merchant through pre-sale and franchise, and organize a database to classify even if the service methods of each merchant are different so that you can effectively provide English production services through the education center. The present invention relates to a writing learning system using the same, a franchise operating system including the same, and a method thereof.

In Korea, the amount of money spent on foreign language education every year is over 4 trillion won, including academy, test book, study paper, reference book, textbook, etc., and even though 1 trillion won is lost every month due to studying abroad and training expenses. As a result, the English level is getting lost. People and times are changing because the study of foreign languages is insisted only on old methods. In the 70's, the textbook was a learning method through printed letters. In the 80's, audio tapes were introduced, and there were learning methods for listening to voice. In the 90's, as the multimedia developed, people began to become acquainted with the method of learning through images. .

Recently, an online learning method through the Internet has been proposed, which is a method of receiving a learning data from a member terminal through a homepage of a company that provides education services online, and outputting it through a display and a speaker to learn by themselves. However, the foreign language learning data of the members provided online as above is mainly composed of audio and video data. Therefore, the conventional foreign language learning method using the online has a problem of not having a great effect on the members' level and their weaknesses, especially those whose writing and grammar are weak, as a listening-oriented foreign language learning method.

Therefore, the present invention was devised to solve the above problems, the object of the present invention is to check the grammar, vocabulary, sentence power, etc. written by a member who is connected to online through a foreign language instructor written sentences of each member The purpose of this course is to provide a foreign language writing and learning system through online evaluation.

In addition, the object of the present invention is to supply content to the registered merchants through the alliance between the companies, and the content of the members of the affiliated merchants by assigning the members attracted from each affiliated store in the headquarters or overseas centers instructors located in the headquarters providing content It is to provide a foreign language writing and learning system for managing and managing learning online and a franchise operation system and method including the same.

The present invention includes the following examples in order to achieve the above object.

According to a first embodiment of the present invention, a member terminal for accessing a homepage and a member application for writing and writing a sentence according to a predetermined theme; An instructor terminal for reviewing and evaluating the composition sent from the member terminal, checking the level, and outputting an instructor evaluation signal; It is preferable to include a web server for transmitting the member writing input signal received from the member terminal to the instructor terminal, and the instructor evaluation signal received from the instructor terminal to the member terminal.

According to a second embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing and learning system of the first embodiment, the web server includes: a member DB storing personal identification information and class progress information of a member; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; It is preferable to include a topic DB that stores a topic of the composition written in the member terminal (Topic).

According to the third embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning system of the second embodiment, the writing of the member asks a topic term in which a topic of writing is set and an answer to be included in the content of the writing. It is preferable to include a question term, a word term in which a word or idiom necessary for writing is written, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal.

According to the fourth embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning system of the second embodiment, the writing evaluation of the instructor terminal is a member writing input section in which the writing written in the member terminal is written, and an error occurs in the writing of the member. It is desirable to include a review section that points to the section and an additional section to which the instructor's advice is added to the member's composition section.

According to a fifth embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning system of the second embodiment, the writing evaluation of the instructor includes a grammar evaluation term for evaluating grammar in the writing of the member, a sentence such as a period and indentation of a sentence, and the like. A sentence code evaluation section evaluating the code utilization, a lexical evaluation section evaluating the relevance of the vocabulary in the written sentence, a logical evaluation section evaluating whether the given topic and the written contents are appropriate, the persuasiveness, and the logic In addition, it is preferable to further include a final evaluation signal of the instructor constituting the instructor evaluation input term input directly from the instructor terminal as a whole.

According to a sixth embodiment of the present invention, an online writing learning system according to the present invention comprises: a member terminal which accesses a homepage and writes a sentence according to a predetermined topic and writes a composition; An instructor terminal for reviewing and evaluating the composition sent from the member terminal, checking the level, and outputting an instructor evaluation signal; Attracts members through the homepage, receives a writing learning selection signal of the member terminal, registers the affiliate server for outputting the writing learning webpage of the member, and registers the affiliate server for requesting registration, and provides contents and skins. It is preferable to include a web server for receiving a writing input signal of the member terminal through the assignment to the instructor terminal, and transmits the instructor evaluation signal received from the instructor terminal to the member terminal through the affiliated store server.

According to a seventh embodiment of the present invention, a franchise operating system using the online writing learning system of the sixth embodiment, wherein the web server includes: a company DB storing information of the affiliated store; A topic DB for storing contents and skins provided to the affiliated server; A member DB which stores member's personal information and class progress information; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; And a topic DB in which a topic of the composition written in the member terminal is stored.

According to an eighth embodiment of the present invention, in a franchise system using the online writing and learning system of the seventh embodiment, the affiliated server comprises: a member DB storing member's personal information and class progress information; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; And a topic DB in which a topic of the composition written in the member terminal is stored.

According to a ninth embodiment of the present invention, there is provided an online writing learning method of the present invention, comprising: a member access step of a member terminal connected to a homepage and logging in; A writing learning selection step of receiving a writing learning request signal from the member terminal; A member writing receiving step of receiving a member writing learning web page inputted from the member terminal; A member writing storage step of storing a member writing learning web page received from the member terminal; Selecting an instructor for reviewing and evaluating the member writing, and instructor assignment step of transmitting a writing learning web page of the member to the instructor terminal of the instructor; An instructor evaluation receiving step of receiving a writing evaluation web page of an instructor prepared by reviewing and evaluating the member writing learning web page from the instructor terminal; An instructor evaluation storage step of storing the instructor writing evaluation web page received in the instructor evaluation receiving step; It is preferable to include a member terminal transmission step of transmitting the instructor writing evaluation web page to the member terminal.

According to a tenth embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning method of the ninth embodiment, the member's writing learning web page includes a topic section in which a topic for writing is set and an answer to be included in the content of the writing. It is preferable to include a question term for asking a question, a word term for writing a word or idiom necessary for writing, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal.

According to the eleventh embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning method of the ninth embodiment, the writing evaluation web page of the instructor has an error in the member composition input section in which the composition written in the member terminal is written and the member composition is written. It is desirable to include a review section that points out the additional sections, and an additional section to which the instructor's advice is added to the composition section of the member.

According to a twelfth embodiment of the present invention, in the online writing learning method of the ninth embodiment, the writing evaluation web page of the instructor includes a grammar evaluation term for evaluating grammar in the writing of the member, a period, indentation, etc. of a sentence. Sentence evaluation clause for evaluating the use of punctuation, sentence evaluation clause for evaluating the relevance of the vocabulary in the written sentence, logical evaluation term for evaluating the appropriateness of the given topic and contents, persuasiveness and logic And, it is preferable to further include the final evaluation web page of the instructor constituting the instructor evaluation input section is input directly from the instructor terminal as a whole.

According to a thirteenth embodiment of the present invention, a franchise operating method using an online writing learning system of the present invention, comprising: a company registration request step of receiving a registration request signal for requesting merchant registration from an online company; A business registration and storage step of storing information of registered affiliated stores; A content providing step of providing a content and a web page skin to an affiliated store registered as an affiliate company; A company skin and a topic receiving step of receiving a topic, a web page format, and a skin of a composition disclosed on a homepage of each affiliate store; Storing a topic and a skin for each company received from an affiliated store server operating the affiliated homepage; Registering the affiliated store server with a call center; Receiving the writing learning web page of the member from the merchant server and transmits to the terminal of the instructor through the call center server, correct the error and the error for the writing learning web page of the member transmitted from the terminal of the instructor And a writing service step of receiving a lecturer writing evaluation web page evaluating the writing level of the member and transmitting the writing evaluation web page to the member terminal through the affiliated store server.

According to a fourteenth embodiment of the present invention, in the franchise operating method using the online writing learning system according to the thirteenth embodiment, the member's writing learning web page includes a topic section for which a topic for writing is set and a content of the writing. It is preferable to include a question term for asking an answer to be included in the word term, a word term for a word or idiom necessary for writing, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal.

According to a fifteenth embodiment of the present invention, in the franchise operating method using the online writing learning system of the thirteenth embodiment, the instructor evaluation web page includes a sentence structure, vocabulary, punctuation, and the like in the writing content input from the member terminal. It further includes a content correction web page that describes the description of at least one of spelling, errors in case, and case-sensitive.

According to a sixteenth embodiment of the present invention, in the franchise operation method using the online writing and learning system of the thirteenth embodiment, the instructor evaluation web page is a description and error about errors in grammar, character structure, and vocabulary of members' writing. It further includes a grammar correction web page with a description to correct the problem.

According to a seventeenth embodiment of the present invention, in the franchise operation method using the online writing learning system of the thirteenth embodiment, the instructor evaluation web page includes a grammatical ability, a vocabulary, an expression power, and a sentence for a writing input from the member terminal. It further includes a final evaluation web page that numerically evaluates the ability of the content to utilize the structure.

The present invention has the effect of improving the member's writing ability as the instructor directly examines and evaluates the contents written by the member in relation to a given topic through online, and advises the member in writing the error and the correct sentence.

In addition, the present invention provides content in cooperation with a large number of merchants, and even small merchants that have difficulty in securing their own database and instructor can raise sales and sales through the headquarters that have their own database and instructor. The business can also be started, and the head office can attract new members, provide contents and sell sales through the affiliated stores, which can provide economic benefits to both the affiliated stores and the head office.

Hereinafter, with reference to the accompanying drawings, preferred embodiments of the writing learning system using the online according to the present invention, a franchise operating system and a method including the same will be described in detail.

1 is a block diagram illustrating a writing learning system using an online system and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention.

Referring to Figure 1, the writing learning system using the online according to the present invention and the franchise operating system comprising the same, the member terminal 10 through which the member can input the writing and receive the evaluation of the instructor online, between the company Merchant server 20 receives the content and skin due to the cooperation, Web server for providing the content to the merchant and receives the writing input signal of the member terminal 10 through the merchant and transmits the evaluation signal of the instructor ( 30), the database 31 storing the authentication information and the provided contents of the affiliated store, the member information, the writing information and the evaluation information of the instructor, and the writing learning web page of the member from the web server 30. Call center server 40 for transmitting to the instructor terminal 50, and the instructor terminal 50 for receiving the member writing input page from the call center server to modify and evaluate the composition of the writing. The.

The member terminal 10 accesses the homepage operated by the affiliated store server 20 or the homepage operated by the web server 30, writes and transmits in a foreign language, and sends the affiliated store server 20 or the web server ( Receive and output the review and evaluation of the instructor received through 30).

The affiliate server 20 receives a company registration request through the web server 30, receives contents and / or skins from the web server 30, and publishes and provides the same through the affiliate store homepage. In addition, when the affiliated server 20 applies for subscription from the member terminal 10, the member information is transmitted to the web server 30, and then the writing input page received from the member terminal 10 is received from the web. It may be transmitted to the server 30 or to the call center server 40. That is, in the present invention, the composition written in the member terminal 10 may be transmitted to the web server 30 from the affiliate store or assigned to instructors secured by itself, which will be described later with reference to FIGS. 2 and 3. do.

The web server 30 stores the information of the affiliated store to apply for registration, and when the writing input signal of the member is received, searches for the registered instructor information and transmits the writing input signal of the member to the read instructor. The web server 30 transmits the instructor writing evaluation input signal received from the instructor terminal 50 to the member terminal 10, and inputs a writing input signal of the member terminal 10 and the writing evaluation of the instructor. The signal is stored in the database 31.

The call center server 40 transmits a writing input signal of a member received from the web server 30 or the affiliate server 20 to the instructor terminal 50, and the instructor transmitted from the instructor terminal 50. The writing evaluation signal of the transmission to the web server (30).

The instructor terminal 50 receives the writing input signal of the member from the call center server 40 and outputs it in the form of a web page, the instructor checks the writing input web page of the member output to the instructor terminal 50 Check the grammar, vocabulary, sentence power, and the like and check the wrong part and input the level evaluation to transmit the writing evaluation signal of the instructor to the call center server 40.

The database 31 includes a company DB 311 that stores company registration information, a topic DB 312 that stores a topic of writing posted on each affiliate store homepage, and a foreign language and a contact information of an instructor. Instructor DB (313) for storing information, Member DB (314) for storing information such as the member's ID, password, and academic progress, Member writing DB (315) for storing sentences written by the member, It includes an instructor evaluation DB 316 for storing instructor evaluation information for reviewing and evaluating the written sentence, and a content DB 317 provided to each affiliate store.

2 is a block diagram illustrating an example of providing a service between an affiliated store and a head office in an online writing learning system and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention.

2, in the present invention, an example of the service providing system between the affiliated store and the head office attracts members at the affiliated store, and the management and learning of the member attracted and registered at the affiliated store is performed through the web server 30. Part of the sales is paid for the content fee and the tuition fee of the member.

To explain this in detail, the affiliated stores attract members through their own sales and manage their own management for each member. The affiliated store does not secure the call center server 40 and the instructor by itself, and proceeds through the instructor secured by the head office through the web server 30. This is because the financial burden is placed on securing a proper number of foreign language instructors for each language in small sized merchants. To this end, the affiliated store pays a part of tuition fee of the member along with the fee for use of the contents to the head office according to the contract between the companies.

FIG. 3 is a block diagram illustrating another example of providing a service between an affiliated store and a head office in an online writing learning system and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention.

Referring to FIG. 3, another example of providing a service between an affiliated store and a main office in a franchise operating system according to the present invention is that the affiliated store builds an instructor and a database 31 on its own, and proceeds to learn a member's composition, as in the above example. It is not made through the server 30.

In detail, the merchant server 20 receives the content from the web server 30, and through the database 31 built on its own member information and instructor information and member's input writing and instructor's writing evaluation Information is stored and connected to the instructor terminal 50 through the call center server. And the affiliated store server 20 receives the member writing input signal received from the call center server 40 and transmits to the instructor terminal 50 through the call center server 40, received from the instructor terminal 50 The teacher's writing evaluation signal is transmitted to the member terminal 10.

Here, the member DB 314 storing personal identification information and class progress information of the affiliated store server 20, an instructor DB 313 including personal information of a lecturer and a member in charge, and the member terminal 10 are created. Member composition DB (315) is the composition is stored, the instructor evaluation DB (316) is stored in the member's writing evaluation made in the instructor terminal 50, and the topic of the composition written in the member terminal (Topic) It is preferable to include the topic DB 312 to be stored.

Therefore, in the franchise operating system of the present invention as described above, another example of the affiliated store and the main office is provided that the affiliated store receives contents from the main office, but the learning of the member is to proceed in itself.

Hereinafter, the description of the operation of the present invention through the configuration as described above, one example of the configuration of the above-described examples and other examples will be mainly described, the technical thoughts applied to other examples also included in the main subject of the present invention.

Figure 4 is a flow chart showing the step of registering a merchant in a writing learning system using online and a method of operating a franchise including the same according to the present invention.

Referring to FIG. 4, the writing learning system using the online and the franchise operating method including the same according to the present invention include a registration step of a merchant and a writing learning step of a member, and FIG. 4 illustrates a registration step of the affiliate store. The registration step of the merchant is a company registration request step (S11) for receiving a registration request signal for requesting the registration of the merchant from the online company, and the company registration and storage step of storing the information of the registered merchant in the company DB (311) ( S12), a content providing step of providing content and webpage skins to affiliated merchants registered as affiliates (S13), and a company receiving a topic and a webpage format and skin of the composition disclosed on each affiliate's homepage. Skin and topic receiving step (S14), storing the topic and skin for each company received from the affiliate server 20 (S15), and the merchant server 20 to the call center server 40 for assignment of instructor Registering step (S16), and the writing learning step (S17) for providing a service by sending and receiving a writing input signal and the lecturer evaluation signal with the merchant server.

The company registration request step (S11) is a step of receiving a merchant registration request signal from the server of the online company where the Internet homepage is built in the web server 30. At this time, the web server 30 from the merchant server 20, for example, the domain, the location or size of the merchant, database 31 information and yaw size, content usage fee and the rate of return for writing learning or Receive an input registration request signal regarding a distribution ratio of sales.

The company registration and storage step (S12) is a step in which the web server 30 receives the registration request of the merchant requesting registration and registers the affiliated store server 20 as an affiliate company of the head office. At this time, the web server 30 stores in the company DB 311 the domain, location of the affiliated store or the size of the database 31 and the consultation agreement.

The content providing step S13 is a step in which the web server 30 reads the content stored in the content DB 317 and transmits the content to the affiliated store server 20. The web server 30 transmits the content requested by the interest code or other selection signal included in the registration request signal to the affiliated store server 20 registered in the registration and storage step, and transmits the content to the company DB 311. Stores the information of the content transmitted by each merchant. Therefore, the affiliated store server 20 uses the contents through its own homepage. The web server 30 transmits a skin of a web page for writing learning of the member to the affiliate server 20 according to a selection or request signal of the affiliate server 20. Accordingly, the affiliated store server 20 constructs a writing learning web page as shown in FIGS. 6 to 8 to attract members or to be described later using skins transmitted from the web server 30.

The company skin and topic receiving step (S14) and the storing step (S15) is the topic DB by receiving the topic and skin of the writing learning applied to the self-learning web page from the merchant server 20 in the web server 30 312. The affiliated server 20 configures a composition learning icon on its own homepage, and the composition learning web page is formed of a topic that is set up with a theme of a skin and a composition forming a certain form of a web page, which is set by each merchant. There is a mutual difference. Therefore, the web server 30 stores information on the topic and composition learning webpage for each affiliated store for compatibility between each company, such as the assignment of instructors according to the format of the topic of the webpage and the format of the webpage, which is different for each affiliated member. The topics and skins of each company are stored in the topic DB 312 for the assignment of the instructor or the review and evaluation of the instructor.

The call center registration step (S16) registers the affiliated store server 20 with the call center server 40 in the web server 30, thus assigning a member writing input signal transmitted from the affiliated store server 20 instructor terminal ( 50 is a step of registering the merchant server 20 to the call center server 40 to be transmitted to.

In the writing learning service step (S17), when the writing input signal of the member is received from the affiliated store server 20 in the web server 30, the call center server 40 transmits to the instructor terminal 50, and then Receiving a review and evaluation signal for the writing input signal of the member from the instructor terminal 50 and transmits it to the affiliated store server 20. This will be described in detail with reference to FIG. 5 below.

5 is a flowchart illustrating a writing learning service step in a writing learning system using online and a franchise operating method including the same according to the present invention.

Referring to FIG. 5, in the writing learning service step of the present invention, a member learning step (S21) in which a member terminal 10 is connected to a home page and logging in, and a writing learning request signal received from the member terminal 10 are received. Selection step (S22), member composition receiving step (S23) for receiving a composition input signal input from the member terminal 10, and member composition storage step of storing the composition of the member in the member composition DB (315) ( S24), an instructor assignment step (S25) of allocating an instructor to review and evaluate the member writing, an instructor evaluation receiving step (S26) of receiving an instructor evaluation input signal input from the instructor terminal 50, and received Instructor evaluation storage step (S27) for storing the instructor evaluation input data in the instructor evaluation DB (316), and the member terminal transmission step (S28) for transmitting the instructor evaluation input signal to the member terminal (10).

The member access step (S21) is a step in which the member terminal 10 logs in by entering an ID and a password on the homepage operated by the affiliate store homepage or the web server 30. Here, the web server 30 receives the ID and password input from the member terminal 10 from the affiliate server, searches for the information stored in the member DB 314, and determines whether there is matching information. Send to the merchant server 20. Therefore, the affiliated store server 20 receives the member information confirmation signal of the web server 30 and permits access to the member terminal 10. Here, the member terminal 10 may be accessed through the affiliated store homepage as described above, or may apply for subscription and registration through the homepage operated by the web server 30.

The composition learning selection step (S22) is a step of receiving a composition learning selection signal from the member terminal 10 in the affiliated store server 20 and transmitting a composition input web page to the member terminal 10. The member terminal 10 clicks the start icon of the writing literature learning item on the affiliated store homepage.

The member writing receiving step (S23) is a step of receiving a writing learning web page input from the member terminal 10 in the web server 30. Here, the affiliated store server 20 outputs the composition learning web page configured from the web server 30 or at the affiliated store home page to the member terminal 10. The composition learning web page is as shown in FIG.

FIG. 6 is a diagram illustrating a writing input signal of a member in a writing learning system using online and a franchise operating system and method including the same according to the present invention.

Referring to FIG. 6, the writing learning web page comprises a difficulty selecting means 101 for selecting a difficulty level of a subject, a subject selecting means 102 for selecting a writing topic according to the difficulty level according to the difficulty selection, and a selected theme song. The main topic display term 103 is outputted, and a composition input term 104 for inputting a composition is included.

The difficulty selecting means 101 includes a level classified from beginner difficulty such as "beginner" to advanced skilled person, and can be selected by operation of the member terminal 10. Here, the web server 30 transmits at least one or more subjects classified as difficulty according to the "beginner" level to the member terminal 10 according to the difficulty selection of the member terminal 10.

The subject selecting means 102 outputs a subject corresponding to the difficulty level selection for each level in the web server 30. Therefore, when the member terminal 10 selects any one of the topics for each difficulty level by the user's manipulation, the selection signal is transmitted to the web server 30. Therefore, the web server 30 stores the topic and difficulty selected from the member terminal 10 in the academic achievement DB (3133).

Here, the topic for each level according to the difficulty selection is stored in the member writing DB 314 in conjunction with the curriculum completion process information for each level stored in the topic DB 312, and the level according to the course of curriculum for each member level A separate writing topic is provided through certain stages. This checks the process information for each level stored in the topic DB 312 in the web server 30 to read and output the list of topics stored in the member writing DB 315 according to the selection of the difficulty according to the level, The topic selected by the member terminal 10 is output to the topic display section 103. For example, the subject display term 103 is displayed by the means selected by the subject selecting means 102. For example, when selecting "About Yourself" through the subject selecting means 102, "Can you Topics like "introduce yourself?"

The composition input term 104 is a term in which the user writes and inputs a sentence corresponding to a subject output in the subject display term 103 through the keyboard in the member terminal 10.

The writing learning web page receives the member terminal 10 in the writing learning selection step (S22), and inputs it to the web server 30 in the member writing receiving step (S23).

The member writing storage step (S24) is a step of receiving and storing the writing learning web page transmitted from the member terminal 10 in the web server 30 or the merchant server 50. The web server 30 receives a writing learning web page input and transmitted from the member terminal 10 through the affiliate server 50. The web server 30 stores the writing learning web page in the member writing DB 315 together with the member information.

The instructor assignment step (S25) is to search and read any one of the instructor information stored in the instructor DB (313) in the web server 30 to examine and evaluate the composition of the member received in the member writing storage step Step to assign. The web server 30 receives and stores the member writing learning web page and searches and reads the instructor DB 313 to assign an instructor to review and evaluate the writing learning web page. Alternatively, the web server 30 preferably assigns the instructor to the member when the member first joins, and takes charge of the composition transmitted from the member. Therefore, the web server 30 transmits the writing learning web page of the member terminal 10 to the terminal of the instructor retrieved from the instructor DB 313 through the call center server 40.

The instructor evaluation receiving step (S26) is a step of receiving a writing evaluation web page of the instructor input from the instructor terminal 50 in the web server 30. Here, the instructor evaluation web page input by the instructor terminal 50 is as shown in FIG. 7 below.

FIG. 7 is a diagram illustrating a writing evaluation web page of an instructor in a writing learning system using the online and a franchise operating system and method including the same according to the present invention, and FIG. 8 is a grammar in the writing learning method using the online according to the present invention. The calibration web page is shown.

7 and 8, the instructor evaluation web page includes a grammar point correcting unit 200 for outputting grammar correction and a content point correcting unit for checking and correcting vocabulary, sentence structure, and expression power. 300. Here, the grammar point correcting means 200 outputs a screen as shown in FIG. 8.

The screen output by the grammar correcting means 200 outputs the student record screen 201, which outputs the writing input from the member terminal 10 on the left side, and the grammar correction screen 202 for checking grammatical errors, The part in which the grammatical error occurred among the contents described in the student record screen on the left is displayed as an icon 203 called "G" in the grammar correction screen on the right.

At this time, the correction display icon in the grammar correction screen 202 is linked to the correction DB 3113 ("G" 203), wherein the linked screen is as shown in Figure 8. That is, in the present invention, If a grammatical error occurs, link the correct grammar information stored in the instructor evaluation DB 316 to the web server 30 in the instructor terminal 50 in order to accurately understand the grammar of the member error, Afterwards, when the member terminal 10 receives the corresponding information, only the click of the icon can be confirmed.

In addition, the teacher evaluation web page includes the content correction means (Content Point) 300, the content correction means 300 is configured as a content correction web page as shown in FIG.

9 is a view showing a content correction web page in the online writing learning method according to the present invention, Figure 10 is a view showing a content correction information web page in the online writing learning method according to the present invention.

9, the content correction web page includes a student record screen 211 on the left side and a content correction screen 301 on the right side. Here, the student record screen 211 displays the writing input by the member terminal 10, and checks the content error (eg, spelling, expression, sentence structure) as the "C" icon 212. In addition, the correction screen 301 on the right is a screen for the instructor to directly write a sentence corrected for the content error or to record an appropriate expression and sentence structure, for example.

In addition, the student record screen, the error-checked "C" icon 212 is linked to the web page of the calibration information stored in the calibration DB (3113) and linked to the content calibration information web page as shown in FIG.

The content correction information web page includes content that guides correct usage of punctuation 401, a spelling method 402, and case sensitivity 403, which are essential components of a sentence. This may be linked to the calibration information stored in the instructor evaluation DB 316 or the calibration information directly input from the instructor terminal 50 may be recorded.

The instructor evaluation storage step (S27) is a step of storing the instructor evaluation web page received from the instructor terminal 50 at the web server 30 in the instructor evaluation DB (316). Here, the instructor evaluation web page includes the instructor final evaluation web page. The web server 30 receives the instructor evaluation webpage from the instructor terminal 50 and stores the instructor evaluation DB 316 including information of the instructor and the member.

In addition, the instructor evaluation receiving and storing step (S26) receives the final evaluation web page for the composition learning ability of the member terminal 10 as well as the instructor evaluation web page for error checking and correction for the composition as described above. can do. The final evaluation web page is the final evaluation of the grammatical ability and content ability for the writing for a certain period of time or the correction of the writing by the member terminal 10 in the instructor terminal 50 as a numerical value, shown in Figure 11 As noted, a final assessment web page is created.

Referring to FIG. 11, the teacher's writing final evaluation web page evaluates Grammar Point and Contents Point as numerical scores, respectively. The web server 30 checks the score for each item recorded in the writing final evaluation web page as described above and stores it in the member DB 314.

The member terminal transmitting step (S28) is a combination of the instructor evaluation web page stored in the instructor evaluation DB 316 and the composition learning web page of the member stored in the member writing DB (315) in the web server 30 The final evaluation web page is sent to the member terminal 10.

As described above, in the present invention, the instructor directly examines and evaluates the contents written by the member regarding a given topic online, thereby improving the writing ability of the member as the member advises errors and correct sentences in writing. .

1 is a block diagram showing a writing learning system using an online and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention;

FIG. 2 is a block diagram illustrating an example of providing a service between an affiliated store and a head office in an online writing learning system and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention;

FIG. 3 is a block diagram showing another example of providing services between an affiliated store and a head office in a writing learning system using online and a franchise operating system including the same according to the present invention;

Figure 4 is a flow chart showing the merchant registration step in the writing learning system using the online and franchise operating method comprising the same according to the present invention,

5 is a flowchart illustrating a writing learning service step in a writing learning system using online and a franchise operating method including the same according to the present invention;

6 is a view showing a writing learning web page of the student terminal in the writing learning method using online according to the present invention;

7 is a view showing an instructor evaluation web page in a writing learning method using online according to the present invention;

8 is a diagram showing a grammar correction web page in the online learning method for writing according to the present invention;

9 is a view showing an input content correction web page of the instructor in the online writing learning method according to the present invention,

10 is a view showing a web page for outputting content correction information in the writing learning method using online according to the present invention;

11 is a diagram illustrating a writing final evaluation web page in the online writing learning method according to the present invention.

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10: member terminal 20: merchant server

30: web server 31: database

40: call center server 50: instructor terminal

311: Company DB 312: Topic DB

313: Lecturer DB 314: Member DB

315: Member Writing DB 316: Instructor Evaluation DB

317: Content DB

Claims (17)

A member terminal which accesses the homepage and writes and writes a sentence according to an application and a predetermined theme; An instructor terminal for reviewing and evaluating the composition sent from the member terminal, checking the level, and outputting an instructor evaluation signal; And a web server configured to transmit a member writing input signal received from the member terminal to the instructor terminal and to transmit the instructor evaluation signal received from the instructor terminal to the member terminal. The method of claim 1, wherein the web server A member DB which stores member's personal information and class progress information; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; The writing learning system using the online, characterized in that it comprises a topic DB that stores the topic (Topic) of the composition created in the member terminal. The composition of claim 2, wherein the composition of the member is A topic term for which the topic of the composition is set, a question term for an answer to be included in the content of the composition, a word term for a word or idiom necessary for writing, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal Writing learning system using on-line, characterized in that it comprises a. According to claim 2, The writing evaluation of the instructor terminal It includes a member composition input section containing a composition written in the member terminal, a review section indicating a part of an error occurred in the member's composition, and an additional section added with an instructor's advice on the composition section of the member. Writing learning system using on-line features. The method of claim 2, wherein the writing evaluation of the instructor A grammar evaluation term for evaluating grammar in the composition of the member, a sentence code evaluation term for evaluating punctuation of sentences such as punctuation and indentation of sentences, a vocabulary evaluation term for evaluating the relevance of the vocabulary in a written sentence, And a final evaluation signal of the instructor constituting the instructor evaluation input term which is input directly from the instructor terminal as a whole. Writing learning system using online. A member terminal which accesses the homepage and writes and writes a sentence according to an application and a predetermined theme; An instructor terminal for reviewing and evaluating the composition sent from the member terminal, checking the level, and outputting an instructor evaluation signal; Merchant server for attracting members through the homepage, receiving the writing learning selection signal of the member terminal and outputting the writing learning webpage of the member; Register the affiliated server requesting registration to provide contents and skins, receive a writing input signal of the member terminal through the affiliated store, assign it to the instructor terminal, and assign the instructor evaluation signal received from the instructor terminal to the affiliated store server. Writing learning system using online, comprising a web server for transmitting to the member terminal through a franchise operating system comprising the same. The method of claim 6, wherein the web server A company database in which information of the affiliated store is stored; A topic DB for storing contents and skins provided to the affiliated server; A member DB which stores member's personal information and class progress information; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; A writing learning system using a online and a franchise operating system comprising the same, characterized in that it comprises a topic DB that stores the topic (Topic) of the composition written in the member terminal. The method of claim 7, wherein the merchant server is A member DB which stores member's personal information and class progress information; An instructor DB including instructor's personal information and a member in charge; A member composition DB in which the composition written in the member terminal is stored; An instructor evaluation DB in which a writing evaluation of a member created by the instructor terminal is stored; A writing learning system using a online and a franchise operating system comprising the same, characterized in that it comprises a topic DB that stores the topic (Topic) of the composition written in the member terminal. A member access step in which the member terminal is connected to the homepage and logged in; A writing learning selection step of receiving a writing learning request signal from the member terminal; A member writing receiving step of receiving a member writing learning web page inputted from the member terminal; A member writing storage step of storing a member writing learning web page received from the member terminal; Selecting an instructor for reviewing and evaluating the member writing, and instructor assignment step of transmitting a writing learning web page of the member to the instructor terminal of the instructor; An instructor evaluation receiving step of receiving a writing evaluation web page of an instructor prepared by reviewing and evaluating the member writing learning web page from the instructor terminal; An instructor evaluation storage step of storing the instructor writing evaluation web page received in the instructor evaluation receiving step; And a member terminal transmission step of transmitting the instructor writing evaluation web page to the member terminal. The method of claim 9, wherein the member's writing learning web page is A topic term for which the topic of the composition is set, a question term for an answer to be included in the content of the composition, a word term for a word or idiom necessary for writing, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal Writing learning method using on-line, characterized in that it comprises a. The writing evaluation web page of claim 9, wherein It includes a member composition input section containing a composition written in the member terminal, a review section indicating a part of an error occurred in the member's composition, and an additional section added with an instructor's advice on the composition section of the member. Writing learning method using the online. The writing evaluation web page of claim 9, wherein A grammar evaluation term for evaluating grammar in the composition of the member, a sentence code evaluation term for evaluating sentence usage, such as a period and indentation of sentences, a vocabulary evaluation term for evaluating the relevance of the vocabulary in a written sentence, and In addition, it further includes a logical evaluation term for evaluating whether a given topic and written contents are appropriate, the persuasiveness and logic power of the content, and a final evaluation web page of the instructor, which constitutes an instructor evaluation input term input directly from the instructor terminal as a whole. Writing learning method using online A company registration request step of receiving a registration request signal for requesting merchant registration from an online company; A business registration and storage step of storing information of registered affiliated stores; A content providing step of providing a content and a web page skin to an affiliated store registered as an affiliate company; A company skin and a topic receiving step of receiving a topic, a web page format, and a skin of a composition disclosed on a homepage of each affiliate store; Storing a topic and a skin for each company received from an affiliated store server operating the affiliated homepage; Registering the affiliated store server with a call center; Receiving the writing learning web page of the member from the merchant server and transmits to the terminal of the instructor through the call center server, correct the error and the error for the writing learning web page of the member transmitted from the terminal of the instructor And a writing service step of receiving an instructor writing evaluation web page evaluating the writing level of the member and transmitting the writing evaluation web page to the member terminal through the affiliated store server. The composition learning web page of claim 13, wherein A topic term for which the topic of the composition is set, a question term for an answer to be included in the content of the composition, a word term for a word or idiom necessary for writing, and an input term for inputting a sentence in the member terminal Franchise operating method using a writing learning method using online, characterized in that it comprises a. The web site of claim 13, wherein the instructor evaluation webpage is In the composition contents input from the member terminal, the content correction web page further comprises a description of at least any one of the structure of the sentence, vocabulary, punctuation, spelling, errors in case and discrimination Franchise operation method using the writing learning method. The web site of claim 13, wherein the instructor evaluation webpage is The writing learning method using the online, characterized in that it further comprises a grammar correction web page containing a description of the grammar, the structure of the characters and the errors of the vocabulary of the member's writing and a description to correct the error. The web site of claim 13, wherein the instructor evaluation webpage is And a final evaluation web page for numerically evaluating the grammatical ability for the writing input from the member terminal and the content ability utilizing the structure of the vocabulary, the expression power, and the sentence.

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